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Post by Mel Stryder on Jul 5, 2008 23:38:31 GMT -5
Melanie ran her fingers through her dark brown hair and walked forward towards the kitchen. She could tell many were gathered there. Since she had had nothing to eat, she thought she'd make her way to possibly sneak some Cheetos. Maybe she'd have to ask Jared...
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Post by Sunny on Jul 6, 2008 19:04:25 GMT -5
A/N: I'm gonna do this like I do fanfiction. I'm guessing it's in third person but your following the character you're being. I'm not good at this, but that's probably because I never tried to be Sunny before and besides, it's practice Rp! So I'm gonna try it out. It's gonna be something I make up from Sunny's first year of being a human.
Disclaimer: I don't own The Host, Sunny, or anything in that matter. A shame isn't it.
Sunny sat down in the shade of a maple tree. It was the beginning of summer and the heat was becoming a pain these days. At 103 degrees who wouldn't be bothered by the sun?
Jodi was running around chasing his wife, Dorris. Sunny watched silently, giggling every time Jodi would playfully tackle Dorris to the ground and vice versa.
Sunlight Passes Through the Ice loved being a human. She loved everything, starting with all the lights and buildings to the power of the memories humans posses. Being able to run on two legs was bliss, trying out different foods was completely enjoyable. Sunny's host loved Chinese food exspecially.
A/N: Well that's all I have. I think it was good. Comments and critz are welcome!
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Post by Mel Stryder on Jul 6, 2008 21:17:22 GMT -5
{{OOC}} That was very good, Sunny! Perfect RP example!
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Post by Sunny on Jul 7, 2008 7:37:05 GMT -5
{{OOC}} THANK YOU MEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by April on Jul 8, 2008 10:23:09 GMT -5
Ooc: Yay! ut you should really get the book. Its urber cool.
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Post by Mel Stryder on Jul 8, 2008 13:58:45 GMT -5
{{OOC}} It IS uber cool. *points to april's signature and does the broken hobo dance*
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Post by April on Jul 8, 2008 22:53:16 GMT -5
Ooc: hahaha I did that in my kitchen raid! while eatting a roll. -does the dance with her-
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Post by Casey on Jul 10, 2008 11:11:20 GMT -5
[OOC: SOOO SAAWWWYY IF I'M POSTING BEFORE BEING ACCEPTED T________T;; I think I need practice]
Casey slumped against the hard rock, hearing the sand and gravel give under her. "Ugh..." She groaned pushing her bangs away from her sweating forhead. She reached into her bag and pulled out her sloshing water, taking a well deserved swig from it. "It's not getting any closer." She said sighing and pushing herself onto numb feet. "God I hate the desert."
(Is that good?)
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Post by Mel Stryder on Jul 10, 2008 13:07:37 GMT -5
{{OOC}} Yes, yes, very good Casey!! *dances*
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Post by Shanae Denzil on Jul 10, 2008 21:39:14 GMT -5
OOC: I need practice, sadly...
The sun was blazing hot as the young girl sat on the irregularly shaped rock in the dessert. This was not an experience she had ever encountered before! Her past life was cool, silent, and just normal. But this, this was torture for her! Shanae raised her frail hands and swept the beads of sweat that damped her forehead. Everthing was light that it hurt her eyes, she had lost her strength a long while ago as she passed another broken rock.
"Curse this d**ned dessert!" She screamed at the sun as she covered her eyes and dropped her head once again.
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Post by Mel Stryder on Jul 11, 2008 12:43:49 GMT -5
{{OOC}} You're very good, actually, Shanae, the RPs you've posted so far are very well worded. ^^
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Post by Sunny on Jul 15, 2008 12:55:58 GMT -5
{{OOC}} u people are so good, hmm. I wish i knew such big words.  ...  cheeseeeeee! |
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Post by Shanae Denzil on Jul 18, 2008 7:49:16 GMT -5
{oOc:}Sssank you! Actually i have a bit of mistakes in there, hahah, hope you don't mind
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Post by Lena/Angie on Aug 1, 2008 9:02:44 GMT -5
OoC: I really need to practise so, please criticise
"Ugh," groaned Angie. The light the humans had flashed into her eyes was painful after the utter darkness.
"It's a soul," I heard someone mutter, "How perfect for Doc."
At his words, I was gripped with a paralysing fear. "Lena?" I thought desperately.
"Don't say anything," she warned. "Not one word."
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Post by Mel Stryder on Aug 1, 2008 21:51:08 GMT -5
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Lena/Angie-- I'm stunned be your bravery. It's gonna be very hard for you to keep up with a Soul inside a Host, but I think you can pull through, because you've shown it above. Keep working to make your sentences longer, and try not to get confused. I would, haha, Nicely done.
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... 
cheeseeeeee!
